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Review:Bryarly says:
So now I'm a bit pissed off.

I mean, I had really started to love this story. I mean, I started reading it this morning and in the course of about three hours I have been kind of uncomfortable, a little bit annoyed and I have loved it.

And now I hate it.

I mean, Anna and Freddie! Come on! I need more details than that! It's hard to feel anything in particular about something that's supposed to be so tragic when there are no details and the characters involved aren't really acting like something that's supposed to be that huge has happened!

And lying to Taylor was bad, fair enough but it is not on a par with what happened with Donny, and the fire wasn't even directly related to the lie and I don't get why she's so pissed off because she got a boyfriend out of it!

And Donny! I mean ok, that story actually made me kind of upset, because he died and that's sad. But the way he wasn't properly mentioned before strikes me as odd, especially in Isa's internal monologue, and I remember Taylor saying she talked about him to Louis, but I don't really...

I mean, I just can't feel it. It was sad, but it didn't make me cry, which with things like that I kind of don't like.

If something is sad, I want it to make me feel sad, but it didn't.

And James and Isa! Something is obviously there, and I'm kind of intrigued as to how it'll work out because her blindness would make her automatically shy of love affairs in general.

But it's not really getting addressed! And it should.

And anti-jokes are hilarious, you're quite right.

7/10

Bryarly :)

Author's Response: Yea their break up was sad for me too :( you'll find out more later.

Taylor was mad that isa not only lied to her but almost died also. Taylor overreacted clearly, but she loves Isa and the thought of losing her was unbearable.

Donny was mentioned several times. But I didn't want to make it this huge thing. If I had a twin brother who died, I wouldn't want to talk about it a lot either.


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