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Review:CherryBoom says:
It was quite an ingenious idea to use a heartbeat as a repetitive element in this fic. In a way, I think that it takes the part of the dialogue here. And I love that you never say in fic anything about the identity of the characters, as that is, after all, pretty obvious. The tactile details combined with his idea of love and his regret, let alone the fact that he just isn't ready to give up her physically, really work here.

I never felt a need for dialogue here, so I do believe that you conquered that challenge easily. While using blood and a heartbeat technically isn't very canon, I can totally appreciate the reason they were used here. The idea of him having literally her blood in his hands is quite powerful imagery.

It was beautifully written. =)

And by the way, thank you for all your work in the House Cup!

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for your very kind words. Here, the heart and the blood are merely metaphors - we know that Snape never actually held her heart in his hands, but for the purpose of this story the imagery signifies how direct and damaging his actions were and how they caused her death. Thank you so much for the review :)

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