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Review:Bryarly says:
I have laughed quite a lot this chapter. Nicely done.

I don't really think you could call the Meddlers the Marauders 2.0 though, that might be stretching it a bit.

But I'm still reading, so you know... And all this is growing on me.

I mean, I prefer it a lot more now that it isn't just Isa going 'I'm blind!' over and over.

I mean, that was a bit... Much for me.

And I feel less awkward about the whole thing so...

I mean, the only thing I really have criticism wise that you could describe as vaguely constructive is to get a beta reader, to tune up the grammar a bit. Because the spelling is fine, it's just that you need to fine-tune it a bit.


Bryarly :)

Author's Response: I'm glad it's getting better! :)

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