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Review:Bryarly says:
Well in fairness to you this is staying on a level that isn't making me want to throw stuff out the window.

I especially liked Polly's 'do you need help' and Dom's 'no, don't be stupid she did it by herself before she can still do it now.'

I mean, you write well, but I feel kind of uncomfortable about her blindness.

And I think that's what I'm hoping will improve. She's the main character, and I, as the reader, shouldn't feel so uncomfortable about her.

8/10

Bryarly :)

Author's Response: Isa can take care of herself.

I'm confused why she makes you uncomfortable. I would love to hear your input so I could improve the character


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