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Review:Bryarly says:
Hi.

So, firstly, apart from various grammatical incorrectnesses, you write reasonably well.

Secondly, I kind of like the idea of.. Um.. A blind character being the focus. I mean, I've seen exactly one story based on the same premise, but it was a guy. And he was gay. And I'm not against that or anything but I like to be able to relate to characters I'm reading about.

I like Isa.

But the thing is; it's completely fine saying 'there are things I can't do' but there are ways around at least some of those things.

I am half-blind, and I type where I can't write.

Now, I know magic doesn't allow for anything electrical, but typewriters aren't electric, and it's easy enough to teach someone where the keys are, especially if they have raised letters.

I do like the beginning, and I'm going to keep reading, but I hope it doesn't turn into one of those 'let me touch your face so I can see into your soul and know you much better than any sighted person ever could'.

Because that's bullshit and would really get on my wick.

Otherwise, excellent.

7/10

Bryarly :)

Author's Response: How interesting! You know I had never really considered a typewriter. Thank you for your insight, I'm gonna go read the rest of your reviews :)

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