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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your requested review.

First off, let me say that I'm a diehard James/Lily shipper so I was (and still am) very skeptical about reading a story where Lily is paired with an OC, but nonetheless, I'm impressed at the start of this story. It's original and not a very explored way of writing the Marauders. I'm quite curious to see Mark's character develop.

I adore your use of nostalgia in this chapter: mentioning Severus (I hope we see more of him in chapters to come) and going back to the park where, basically, everything began (in a way to speak).

In your "areas of concern" you mentioned a reviewer commented on your beginning. I had a look through the reviews for the first chapter and I didn't really know what I was suppose to comment on :/

Jasmine, x

Author's Response: I understand your apprehension; I am also a diehard Lily/James shipper, but I justify this by saying this takes place before Lily and James get together. I'm glad you like the use of nostalgia, and as you've already discovered, Snape does pop up again :)

Sarah x


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