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Review:classicblack says:
The feels Helen. I can't get over all these intense emotions and sympathy (yes, I know he hates sympathy) for Sirius! It's honestly ridiculous. I just want to give him a big bear hug, which shows you're far too good a writer because I rarely get so emotional over stories. And now I feel bad for having dyed the bottom of my hair purple (I actually didn't even think about TAOB/S when I did it) because it would remind Sirius of Mary...

This chapter actually makes me despise Lily a little bit for being so rude and non-understanding towards Sirius in TAOS. However, I do remember that she did have a good reason for leaving after Mary died, so Sirius is a little unfair when it comes to that. He was hurting so badly and all he wants to do is feel something again and taking care of Lily helps with that. I actually really enjoyed Sirius's numbness at the beginning of the chapter much better than if you had made Sirius all sad right away. It fit very well in your characterization of Sirius in previous stories.

This chapter was actually just sort of beautiful. I really loved it all around because it made me have so many feelings and made me love Sirius just a little bit more. Also, I feel like Sirius was actually following the 5 stages a little bit, just James didn't know because Sirius retracts inside himself when he's upset.

"who spoke fluent sarcasm" I don't know why, but this honestly made me laugh and choke up at the same time. It was perfect for Mary but also so incredibly sad because Sirius lost the love of his life that he knew so well and loved for all her faults.

"deliberately ignoring my half empty glass" I like this line. I don't know if you meant it, but I think it really shows how pessimistic about everything Sirius is at this time. He's looking at the "glass half empty" instead of half full.

This was just so amazingly heartbreaking and wonderful. Thank you for not getting tired of the TAOB universe and writing this and TAOS. I just can't get enough! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Happy writing,
classicblack

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