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Review:TenthWeasley says:
This is going to be such a fun story! I am just so in awe; how you can turn around from something like Run to write a short story of this nature... I will never understand you. But that's largely part of the fun!

I love your Audrey. Absolutely love her. ♥ I've not had a lot of experience with Percy/Audrey, but what I have read of their pairing makes it seem like they're all about angst and finding love through tragedy, or things of that nature. But I like her a lot more here, because she's just a bit mad, but still extremely likeable! I can so see your sense of humor woven throughout this story, in the way she looks at the world. Of course she would take something so innocent as Percy Weasley coming out of an ice cream shop and turn that into a vampire stake-out (still laughing at that pun, that is brilliant). Although you know, that is a very attractive image... Mmm, Percy.

I am just going to tell you right now that we had better actually see Oliver in this story. I love that he's Head Detective! Nobody ever does that, it is fantastic. And it's even better that he got that way because he fell on his head in a Quidditch match. :D Oh, help, that is too funny. I'm leery now, because I'm pretty sure I grinned so much at this chapter and I have no idea who might have seen, and there is really nothing funny about infant development. Oops. But yes -- definitely, definitely need to see more Oliver. I love him so much already and you didn't even write him in person.

ENJOYING THIS STORY SO, SO MUCH SO FAR. ♥ This is so great!! You have to let me know when you update immediately. I love your humor. ♥ You are a tops humor writer, period.


Author's Response: Fun stories are so much easier to write! They require very little thought. I can just snack on sugar for an hour and just type whatever comes out. Going from a post-Hogwarts like Run to a post-Hogwarts like this is very different, but I love changing things up.

I'm pretty sure that your appreciation of Percy is why I was interested in writing him in the first place. His cameo in Growing Up Weasley and then your Percy one-shot.

Lulz, you are going to see me all over this story. I just can't keep myself out of it.

You will deffo see Oliver! He will appear in chapter 4, I do believe, which I am going to try to write today. :3 We've all heard about Quidditch star Oliver, so I thought it'd be nice to stick him somewhere else.

Have I told you lately how awesome you are for always reading stuff I write? You don't have to but you always do, anyway. ♥ You are the literal best.

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