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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is so so so brilliant!!

It really has the reader stuck in the story, and when she didn't get the seeker job I swear I had to restrain myself from punching the computer.

The twist with the seeker position and the beater position is done amazingly - sometimes when that kind of plot is used it can be a bit fake and cheesy, but it's absolutely wonderful in this context. It gives the reader a roller coaster of emotion - the anxiety on the pitch, the intensity of the seeker scene, the sadness as she fails and then the awesomeness as she gets beater, all beautifully wrapped up in one delightful chapter.

I love the way she's a Wood - that's so awesome and original - and the way you describe Sirius is perfect. Lazy and nonchalant yet actually very good at it. The description is of a perfect amount - enough to make it very realistic, yet not too much to still keep the reader interested.

As far as stories go, this one's fantastic and I'd like to see a lot more of Jenny!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much- I didn't want it to be cliched but I also needed to establish Sally as someone who didn't give up and I also didn't want to make it easy for her- a little of a tough balance!
Thank you for a lovely review!

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