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Review:LittleMissPrincess says:
Oh my goodness! Is this real life?! or have you really updated again?!

the end is near? NOOO! OH THE HORROR! what ever shall i do? :(

jklsdhgkhs yesss, i wan't to watch 'the perks of being a wallflower' but i can't because i have my exams in four days, and my best friend wont even lend me the book because she's a jerk but...

ON TO THE STORY >>
(wait, i was reading a response you gave to one of my reviews and it pleases me to know that you watch doctor who yayayay)

Anyway, this story wasn't a filler, it was more of a -extract of flora's mind- so that we know how she's reacting to all this.

By the way, that monologue was nice. Oh, and it was cute that Albus asked her to stay with him in the holiday's, although i must say that i miss the old socially awkward flora that would have blushed terribly resembling a beetroot if he asked her that - BUT at the same time i'm incredibly pleased with her (yes, i know shes a fictional character, shhh) for coming this far in the story.

Also, i'm very proud of you for depicting this entire chapter in a scene that shows that dark times are coming (yes, i accidently took the left to blunderland. danger! danger! keep out!) but not in a terribly spooky way.

Wheres fauna? why is she ignoring - or NOT ignoring our dear flora?

and wait, i have to mention the monologue again, BECAUSE I MEAN COME ON, we would be lying if that's not how we act in real life. Going through different scenarios in our heads to see which would have the best outcome, and then by the time we've decided, they've already walked away.

ooo he showed her the invisiblity cloak. I'm picturing the first time kid Amy saw the Doctor pop out of the TARDIS.

Okay i'll stop making parallels, sorry.
okay i just really want Albus to be the doctor okay? he wears a fez now. fezzes are cool.

this is a very long review - and i apologize. actually i dont, i want you to read this and then be like, wow this girl really likes my story, sure her reviews give me a migraine, but i'm reading between the lines and i know that she wants me to update.

ALLONS-Y

Author's Response: is this the real life, or is it just fantasy?

of course I watch doctor who! pretty much the only tv I watch to be honest...

ahhaa. flora's overcome her demons of social awkwardness! she cast them all into the fiery chasm from whence they came.

fauna went to the moon. sorry.

I'm more picturing when rory first saw the tardis and was totally nonplussed by the whole affair.

he wears a stetson now. stetsons are cool.

ah no I love your reviews! GERONIMO ♥


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