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Review:Leslie says:
Ooo, your favorite chapter?? That's exciting!! :D
You completely melted my heart with putting that little boy in there. I love children and that part alone made me want to cry! And what Draco said, about how he hoped to have what she has one day - Awww!! And him helping them to safety even when he was in that much danger just shows how different he is. And Emily coming back to help him... It was all so perfect. Though I wish Bellatrix was killed right then and there! Haha That scene was done so well!! I really hoped he would go straight to the Weasley's - it seems too obvious for him to have gone home after all that! I feel like someone will be able to find him a lot easier!!!

I loved that whole section that was from the original summary, about how he had left her. I'd been wondering where that would come into play. :) And the very last line, all I wanted to say after that was YES DRACO, GO FIND HER! Hahaha

I loved this chapter. I can see why it's your favorite! This was fantastic and so exciting!

Author's Response: Yes, by far my favorite!! And I'm glad you liked it so well! I know, I loved the whole thing about the kid and having Emily come back to help him. I feel like having Bellatrix being killed would've been too easy. Who would've done it?! Bellatrix is of prodigious ability, according to her Lexicon, and I thought it would've been too easy the rest of the way to have her so easily rid of.

Yes, it SEEMS a little too easy to go home right away, but in the next chapter, you'll see why it'll be okay temporarily. However, they both do know the dangers of staying there...

Hope that's enough of a cliffhanger.

So glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you for your continued support and I hope to hear from you soon! :)



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