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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Hello, I'm here with your requested review!

I am actually really warming up to next-gen fics. I think that fanon has done such a good job with developing the characters on their own that, this long after the seventh book came out, it's like they're real characters that I know. What I'm trying to say is don't be sorry for asking me to review a next-gen at all. :) Although I did have to look up who Louis was because I haven't read the books in so long XD

I really love your introductory scene. Really great job portraying the relationship between two characters who aren't actually able to speak to one another--and I love the age you've chosen to give the characters. We rarely read about them at this point in their lives (post-Hogwarts, I'm assuming.) Really nice!

The part about thinking Beethoven is a dog was really funny, and that she made a comment about it on the air.

Your characterization of Rose seems very thought-out. And although we don't get a verbal description of your OC, per se, it seems like she has a strong personality that you've also taken into serious consideration.

I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors, but there are some punctuation mistakes scattered throughout the story. I'd advise going back and looking over it or finding a Beta to check punctuation for you :)

All in all, I think it's a really good start. The relationship between Rose and Grace as well as Grace and Louis are really believable. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I really like next-gen fanfics- I don't know why... It's not like I don't write about wars and such, I just like them :D I don't even think Louis appeared in the books... There are just those magical few who JK stuck on the family tree ;)

Very much post-Hogwarts- I cannot write Hogwarts, no idea why... Thank you, though, it's really hard, considering they couldn't talk.

hehehe that was a last minute addition, but I do rather like her.

Hmm, I do tend to work quite hard on my characters- I always get worried that it doesn't show and I still end up flailing around.

I shall go and look over it! I do have a beta request up, but no-one has taken it... wah. I really, really need.

Thank you so much again for taking the time to write me such a great review!

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