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Review:my_voice_rising (not signed in) says:
Hey! Back again with your requested review.

I liked the scene with the Marauders all hanging out in animagus form, especially the adorable camaraderie between Moony and Padfoot. I also liked when Prongs got caught in the window with his antlers...hehe.

I wonder if Ivan and his brother will make a reappearance? I also thought the bit about McGonagall being proposed to was an interesting touch and am wondering if it will come in to play later.

There were a couple misused or repeated words ("would would" for example) that I noticed throughout the chapter, but if you went back and looked over it I'm sure you'd catch them.

A very long chapter indeed, but you covered a lot of ground here. Your explanation for how they figured out what Remus was, and became animagi, was very believable. Nice work!

Author's Response: Ugh, I can't believe that I took FOREVER to answer your review! :( I'm so sorry!! However, I'm here! Ready to answer it!

I absolutely loved writing the Marauders in their animagus form. They were more fun and yet challenging to write in this form but I'm glad people liked it! Moony and Padfood get along the most because Moony (Wolf) sees Padfoot as almost an equal just because he's another canine.

Ivan and his brother will not make a comeback. At least not that I'm planing on yet. They're not important to the story. They were just to show those moments where Remus came close to biting other people. The bit with McGonagall being proposed comes from Pottermore. I wanted to add that bit of extra canon to the story to make it a bit 'round' if that makes a bit of sense.

I'm glad that you caught those mistakes and I'll go ahead and do a quick read through before I post the next chapter.

And this, so far, has been the longest chapter but it needed to be done. Mostly because this story was suppose to be only a two chapter story. Until I was convinced to go ahead and continue.

Anyway, thank you for your kind review and once more, I'm so sorry that I took forever to respond! :S

Thank you,

Rosie


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