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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your belated requested review!

I really enjoyed this. Seriously. You had me hooked from the first sentence and then her backstory just made me very happy. She doesn't seem like the kind of character that could become a Mary Sue easily. I really like her.

The only thing that I picked up was this: The Orphanage / it shouldn't be capitalized (unless the name of the orphanage is The Orphanage). Apart from that I got nothing :)

Honestly there is nothing else I can say for this story: I adored it and can't wait for me. Please let me know when the next chapter is up!

Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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