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Review:hpsauce says:
A tear actually came out of my eye at the end of this and I just really felt for Lysander.
I'm not a twin myself, but I feel how he always feels he is in his brother's shadow and always second best, always ignored.
I liked that he had a little moment with lily at the end and that maybe he's not always second best with everything and the hope that that little action gives us that he won't always come second to his brother.
A truly moving piece that made me just want to give Lysander a big fat hug and tell him he's awesome too :')
I'll get back to you about placings in my challenge just after New Year.
Thanks for writing and entering my first ever challenge :D
hpsauce

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this oneshot and while I'm sorry that it made you cry, I'm very happy that it affected you so much! I'm not a twin either but I can imagine that it's hard - in certain cases, that is. As we see with Fred and George, they can be incredibly close.
And that's exactly what I was hoping to portray at the end when Lily smiled at him; he's not really second best in anyone's eyes but his own.
And I'm sure that he'd appreciate a hug :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Great and fun challenge! :)

~Jess :D


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