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Review:Dezire_427 says:
This gal over here hates Artie Stein and Mark Briscoe, the male chauvanistic pigs!

You've done a great job with this chapter as well. The natural ebb and flow of moods was perfectly managed. I can really see what Norah is doing here. My absolute favourite part was when she fired Briscoe, and her comment over her speciality in walking through hot waters was my favourite quote. She's an exemplary to female sports team owners evrywhere, and I love her drive, focus and enthusiasim, as depicted by your wonderful writing. Keep it up!

Oliver's back! Personally, I think it was an excellent description of him that you gave. J.K. would have approved. And a dash of Fred?! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Cheers and chocolates,
-Akansha.

Author's Response: Haha. This gal over here despises their guts as well. If it's one thing I hate, it's male chauvinism. Norah does too. She breathes the motto "Anything you can do, I can do better".

Thanks. I'm glad the moods came through well enough. She's confused, nervous, possibly a little excited.

That's probably my favorite bit too. He deserved to be fired. Not only was he not producing, but he didn't know how to bite his tongue and show respect to his new boss. With all the hot water she's going to be wading through, she better be a pro at it, haha.

Norah's blushing over here, which I assure you, is not an easy thing to have her do. She posed for Howl, after all! And your compliments have me blushing as well. You're far too kind!

Yes, Oliver. I couldn't resist. I thought to myself, why create a virtual unknown, when we have a passionate man who loves Quidditch already available through canon? For some reason I've always seen him as someone who would go on to manage when his career is over. Someone like him doesn't just sit on the sidelines. He'd rather be in the thick of it.

And yes, a dash of Fred. I hope you like him ^^.

Thanks so much, Akansha. Your reviews have definitely improved my day. (:

~Leigh


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