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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your requested review (I took my time didn't I? Sorry I took so long -- I guess life caught up with me!)

I think you did rather well with your second person POV. It's a very unused point of view and I've found, whenever I've tried it, that it's really difficult so I think you did a good job :) Although, I have to ask: why did you change perspectives in the middle of the story? It's not as though I found it confusing because I still knew who you were talking about but I'm just curious because it did subtract from the story a little...

The imagery is lovely. I'm really curious to see how Poppy gets better :)

Also, that's a brilliant banner! Carrie in that movie is just so amazing!

Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for coming. And there's no problem at all with taking some time; I don't mind.

I'm very relieved to hear that second person didn't get overbearing in this piece. I did have to switch perspectives though because the character changed. Maybe that was a bit unclear?

And I agree with you! It's one of my favourite books and movies! Ahoythere is the one responsible for this banner's beauty though! :D

Thanks for the review and thank you for offering! -hugs-

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