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Review:Leslie says:
I just wanted to go back and say something about this chapter. I thought you did this scene so beautifully. You were descriptive enough for the reader to know what was going on, but vague and symbolic enough that it wasn't trashy or graphic or anything. It was really beautiful and I can't imagine this scene being written any better!

Also, I LOVE Draco's theory about the unicorn patronus. :) So sweet! And of course their conversations are just so adorable. The whole thing was pretty exceptional, and worth going back to review! :D

Author's Response: Oh good!! I'm so glad you thought exactly that! I was trying to make the scene beautiful and intimate. I hate how we as a society think its a smash and dash! That's not how I view it personally, and I didn't want my characters to feel that either! So I'm glad it came off that way!

I can't express to you how much your approval of the patronus means! I felt like it was so cheesy and stupid, but I couldn't think of a better fit, because they are so precious and rare as viewed by the wizarding world! I couldn't think of a better animal, but I felt so silly writing it. So thanks!

Thank you so much for reviewing! I was thinking "Is she reading this backwards?!" because I know you've reviewed the more recent chapters. I'm very touched you went back and reviewed, because those types of scenes are kinda awkward to put it, and I didn't hear from anyone, so I felt awkward putting it in.

Its awesome to hear from you, as always, and I'm moving on to your next review that I have underneath this one. Thank you so much Leslie for your awesome input throughout this story, it truly means a lot to me! :)

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