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Review:BKL8008 says:
A story within a story, complete with its own review? Interesting, and pulled off well. I do have one critique - I really don't get who Alphard is in this chapter, just that he's a Malfoy and we're in the Manor. That could use a bit more, however, they are interesting characters.

Author's Response: Hey again!

Yes, hopefully I won't end up making it so hard to understand! And I'll go back to the chapter -it's next on my to-edit list- and I'll try to add a few more things that will make who he is more obvious.

Thank you for this helpful review! :D

-Manno


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