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Review:water_lily43175 says:
Yay, a Ron chapter!

Tanith feeling bad for having mocked Harry. She's definitely coming round to him! I like this, naturally.

Scindo sounds... Vicious. Really vicious

I love the Jen/Vaughn interaction. Absolutely LOVE it. Because Jen is a total stickler for doing things right, because you can't be caught short when you're prosecuting, and Vaughn really couldn't care less about procedure!

Okay. Lackardy didn't kill Jacob. This is getting REALLY suspicious now. Did the same person kill an Auror and a minor Death Eater? Though I guess that for all most people know, Jacob was a part of Thicknesse's lot too. I knew that something would come from Lackardy's statement that someone broke into his place. HMM. And another bad-MLE-person death. So... Someone trying to punish people who've done bad stuff? Someone trying to punish people who they think should be carrying on with the Remnant? INTERESTING.

Yay, Will time! I've missed him. Of course, Cal now feels as though he owes Thanatos his company. Or at least that he shouldn't leave him to rot in prison. Which he SHOULD, Thanatos really deserves nothing more. In a way, Will isn't the person to ask here - because he may tell Cal to do what he thinks is right, but the bottom line is that Will can't stand him, and rightly so, and doesn't think it's a good move for Cal to keep in contact with him. I'm beginning to see what's going to happen here - Cal's going to keep up the contact and Thanatos is somehow going to try to poison his mind. NOT GOOD. Interesting chapter. DEVELOPMENTS. Excited for more :)

Author's Response: Because sometimes Ron gets good lines too. Not just Katie. Oh, Katie, if I let you have your way, you'd get the title quote every time. Even chapters you don't appear in.

Harry is - well, he's Harry. Even Tanith, the eternal cynic, is not immune to the powers of Harry Potter Being a Nice Guy (especially now he's a load more relaxed with a dead Voldie). On the other hand, Jen and Vaughn were never going to see eye to eye, because Vaughn isn't exactly played by Clint Eastwood but he's not a man for the book (which is why he avoided corruption and RANK during the Fudge era), while Jen believes in the system. Though at least her thoroughness found what the Aurors didn't - indeed, not everything adds up with Lackardy's situation. Vigilantism's the obvious guess.

You're right - Will is not the best person to ask here because of his various biases. Not that his biases are unreasonable but if Cal needs to hear objective ideas, Will isn't who he'll hear them from. On the other hand, hearing some biases is pretty useful when it comes to Thanatos! But more on his little schemes later. Many developments (even if this is, I think, one of the more filler-y chapters in the whole story). More to come! Cheers for reviewing.


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