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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
OH! I was going to wonder, in the last review, what was wrong with Percy. Then I read this, and I think I have just a little bit of understanding. So far, my theory is that what he did is getting to him? How much, I don't know. Will he tell? :O

Harry is needed to solve this mystery and be there for his family, he's not allowed to think those thoughts. Purely for what I just said, not because I'd cry because he's one of my favorite characters. Well, maybe that, too.

So, what I'm trying to say is, Dumbledore is wise and he should be listened to. Speaking of Dumbledore's words, I loved how you ended it. It felt very foreshadow-y, there is another destiny for him.

His chapter was both sad and sweet. I loved it.

Sam.

Author's Response: Hello, again!

The guilt Percy feels about what he's done is having an impact, but it's not the whole story. Watch Percy carefully. The troubles he's having are actually very central to the story.

Harry goes thought a lot in this story. There's a part of me -- the part that forgets that these are fictional characters because I tend to identify with them so strongly -- that feels badly about the things that I put him through. Granted, I can't hold a candle to JKR when it comes to placing Harry in awful situations, but I still feel bad.

Dumbledore is indeed wise. And this isn't the last time that you'll be hearing from him.

Thanks so much for continuing to read and review!


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