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Review:manno_malfoy says:
WHY ISN'T THE BOY INTRODUCED IN THIS CHAPTER?! WHY HOLD HIM OFF? I WANT MYSTERY MAN NOW!

Okay, I'm calmer now. Wish I had gnomes to throw off when I'm angry; I'm kind of jealous.

What I really liked about this chapter was how you picked things that happen routinely -mornings, night-outs, and family gatherings at the Burrow- and showed how Molly was acting differently towards these things. It really develops her as a character and it's fun to see that she's starting to adapt to things and embracing the fact that the accident may have changed her.

I like how she and Lucy have bonded a little this chapter and how both Lucy and James are trying their best to be supportive.

Although this chapter felt like a lot of dialogue and little description, I felt that it kind of worked with this particular story. Molly is just trying to get to know the people around her again and they're testing her to see if she's still the same person. And I think you're doing a great job with showing how she feels about all of this.

NEXT CHAPTER! Mystery man better be there!

-Manno

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