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Review:rez says:
my god.

this part made me cry.
It only seemed right to say something. But Percy didn’t know any prayers for the departed, having never had to use them before. So he said the only one that popped into his mind, which he still remembered by heart, despite a sore lack of use.

“Hail Mary, full of grace…”

He got halfway through it and suddenly found it difficult to get the words out. He forced one word at a time in between sobs and deep breaths.

“…Pray for - for - for us - ” And then his voice didn’t work anymore.

“Pray for us sinners, now and at the hour of our death, amen,” finished a low, tense voice behind him.

this is so damn depressing but you're a fantastic writer, as you've no doubt been told. would love to see that fourth chapter up :)

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