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Review:padmoonyfoot7 says:
This is truly amazing. You go into great detail at explaining the emotions one by one and make them not too difficult to comprehend.

I love the way it's as though Victoire is battling with herself, and the way she progresses slowly throughout the story.

Teddy is written greatly. I like the way she notices how he has changed since she last saw him - I didn't realise that they were engaged, but that's another bonus, because you didn't make it too obvious, too early on - and that he is quite reserved at the beginning, and only starts to get more comfortable when the awkward barrier vanished. Yes, he is quite manipulative towards the end, but once he says that he loves her, it makes everything understandable.

All in all, I loved this story. The ending was fantastic - not too typical, and very clever - and I think that if it was ended any other way, it wouldn't have been quite as good.

This was just really awesome!

Keep up the good work!!

(sorry about the length of my review. I wonder what'd be like if someone used all 6000 characters?)

;D

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you apologised about the length of your review because I was extremely offended by the amount of time and care you took to compliment my writing :P

I kid, I kid. I love long reviews. And I love you. Hope that's not too creepy, but if it is, eh. I'm sooo ecstatic you liked Teddy! When I began writing, it was all about Victoire, and I honestly didn't care for Teddy so much beyond his role as catalyst, but I found that I absolutely loved writing him this way. Happy to hear you enjoyed it as well.

Seriously though, thank you. Reviews, especially the shining ones like this, really do a lot for me and my writing. Thanks for taking the time to write this up, I'm very grateful you did.


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