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Review:Jess the Enthusiast says:
I'm so glad that you updated because I've really missed this story! (And Floral!) I'm so sad for Flora that the muggle-born prejudices are coming back and I really like how you handled it. I like how it started out subtle and then progressed more with time and how Flora didn't know what "mudblood" meant; as a muggle-born it would make sense that she wouldn't know its existence or meaning. And it's just so sad that Scorpius gets bullied so much; I mean, you know more than anybody that that boy can drive me crazy (POOR FAUNA) but he doesn't deserve that kind of treatment. And your characterization of the Malfoy family blew me away - it was so different and so perfect! AND ALBUS LET'S TALK ABOUT HOW PERFECT ALBUS IS. *sigh* I just love him and how protective of Flora he is. And I thought that although he was reluctant to help out Flora with Scorpius, it was great how he did (even though it was to save Flora more than it was for Scorp).

So I really love the turn this story has taken (even though it is dark and sad). So wonderful job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

10/10

~Jess :D

Author's Response: ahh, hello again! Initially, when this story was intended as a subtle send-up of love triangles and teenage drama, I never imagined it getting this srs - and then one day my brain just said 'hunger games meets the perks of being a wallflower, what the hell let's just do it' and now I'm here. I did wonder if I was handling such a sensitive topic so well, so I'm glad you've said that (:

It's kind of hard to make Albus and Scorpius 'believable', in a way - giving them flaws, but still making people root for them. Especially when it comes to Albus, everyone just loves him so much! So I think I have to work a bit harder there ;)

thank you so much for the wonderful review! :D ♥


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