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Review:True Author says:
Hello! I'm True Author with your requested review! =]

Actually, I don't really like Gellert/ Ariana, so I was planning not to read this and tell you so, but somehow, I decided to go through this once and- I'm glad I came here. =] Though I don't fancy the pairing much, I found that Gellert may have loved Ariana after reading this. You have a realistic plot, I must say. =]

Other thing I liked is the way you unfolded the plot. I always love flashbacks and memories, so that way makes this story more interesting. Gellert was completely in character throughout the chapter, so just don't worry about your characters. They are very believable.

You asked me if this has an interesting beginning so I" must say it has! I've already told you how I was absorbed in this. :) One thing, I'd like to tell is that, just go through the chapter for some grammar mistakes, typos and stuff like that. They're not hard to fix...

Otherwise, a great story, =]

Author's Response: Hello!

Fair enough, not many people do but thank you for reading this anyway. Thank you!

Believable characters? me? really!? *happy dance*

Yeah, I've got a new beta.

Thank you!
Jasmine, x

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