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Review:ginnypotter242 says:
Hello there :)

This was so beautifully written. I loved you characterization of Albus (he's so cute! Gah, I love him). Aria was a great character. The phobia was written very well- it was believable and enjoyable. I liked Aria's inner conflicts throughout the story, it made it very real.

I've never actually heard of this fear before. Looking it up, I think you did it justice. It's just...wow. I love your writing style!

I also liked how you ended the peace. (First of all- cute couple!) Even though they kissed, Aria knew she still had issues, everything wasn't magically better. This made the story so real. Aria still had things she had to face, even though that went right- that is something that would happen in real life. A lot of stories have a 100% fairytale happy ending, and I'm glad yours was different. Great job!

~Sara

Author's Response: Hello! :D

Oh wow, thank you so much! Your compliments are lovely! Here, have some love! ♥

I'm glad to hear I did the fear justice, I researched and researched and researched, I'm so happy that it paid off! :D

Omg Al/Aria, didn't even plan to ship them but they are an adorable couple and I couldn't NOT ship them. Getting over a phobia, especially one with such big issues don't really HAVE fairytale endings. It's sad, but it's the truth. And after researching it, I knew I couldn't do a fairytale ending or something so I decided to make it as realistic as possible! :)

I'm glad you liked it, thank you so much for this lovely review! :D


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