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Review:missclaire17 says:
he's in BIG trouble.
Carlotta's not going to take this lightly.
i KNEW that he should have told her beforehand.
at least she didn't find out because James and Harry had a huge argument.
But this isn't good at all!
James is in MAJOR trouble.

I do like how James wanted to see Carlotta and that the sight of her made him smile.
The questions about Carlotta from Deirdre that irked James were interesting.
I don't expect its the first time that he's been asked about his personal life, and I can certainly see why he's upset.
But I feel like even if James wanted to answer questions about his personal life, he wouldn't know how to answer that question about Carlotta anyways because they're not just friends but they're not in a relationship either.

oh James...
I cant wait to see how he gets himself out of this situation with not telling Carlotta about Harry and all of that stuff.

I felt worried FOR James because he was so worried himself that I started to think anything could happen. BUT OF COURSE HE WOULD MAKE IT!
reading about that made me so ridiculously giddy the entire time xDDD

(btw, I'm sorry for not leaving a review on the last chapter! I thought I left one but it turns out that it didn't go through D: so I apologize! xD)

Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter definitely goes from the highest highs to - well, not quite the lowest lows. We do of course have the fall out from this to come. But James goes very quickly from being the happiest guy in the world to being the most miserable grouch! Though he does have good reason, poor thing. He did, indeed, make the squad. He's better than he gives himself credit for!

He should, of course, have told Carlotta about his dad before. As we all knew. But then, he's not the most sensible when it comes to that kind of thing! And he really didn't like the prying into his private life. He's had it before, but it's never been as intrusive as this. And it's made worse by the fact that they know about Carlotta and they're asking questions that he can't answer!

I'm hoping that the next chapter will answer a few questions for you. It certainly covers the James/Harry issue! So hopefully you'll enjoy that one; it should be up within the next week or so. Thanks for reviewing!

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