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Review:~Robin says:
Hee, i like this story and the idea, ive had this kind of idea in my mind for a pretty long time know i recently found HPFF and want to write my own.

I have a few points to wich you may want to take attention :)

1. You grammer, im not native english so my grammer isnt the best either.
2. The storyline, i think your going to quick, it was just the sorting ceremony, and suddenly she is best friends with harry and ron? And they fall in love so quick? (Try doing this a bit more slow. Your story is avout their love right? :) let the readers beg you for the romance, let them want to see it, but tease them a bit, if you know what i mean :) like in the real story, how long have we all been waiting for the ron and hermione kiss? :P LONNNGGG but is was defenitly worth it!)
3. Longer chapters :)

overal really nice

Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful review.
Lyss xxoo

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