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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Elphaba back again,

Okay, so right away, I really liked the part where Sin goes out to harvest plants for her garden! Hermione definitely knew both potions and plants very well, so these kinds of daily activities are a very good fit for her! :)

My main quibble with this chapter is the use of italics. I realize you are using italics to denote Draco's POV, but I don't think it's necessary. Your writing is all in the 3rd person (I do all my writing in 3rd person, too, b/c I like the freedom it gives me) so switching temporarily to Draco's train of thought doesn't jar the reader like it would if you were writing in 1st person. With 3rd person writing you can reveal the thoughts of any character you want, whenever you want. :)

I like how this chapter ends:

"Jazz music played softly in the background as she lost herself in reading about Goshawk’s tips on caring for goldvines."

As soon as I read that I had a feeling that her life was too quiet, and something big was about to happen! Then it did:

"It was close to midnight when a loud blast outside of her door sent shards of wood and smoke flying through the air..."

I'll definitely be back again to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: While writing that final moment I felt like a horrible author... I mean she had finally settled in, when Bam! (Yes, I will admit, a small maniacal laugh happened in my head at that moment) Hehe. I cant wait for you to come back and read some more. Your last review was so helpful and I have it fixed in my edited version. Happy Reading ~ Lady

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