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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Aww this was so bittersweet! Poor Draco has been through so much :/

I liked the fact that Harry spoke at the funeral. I almost forgot that he wouldn't have been there if it wasn't for her and I feel like it was the least he could do :) Where was Ron, though? Did he not go?

I was glad you made Draco and Teddy have a little moment in your fic, too. I almost never think of them being family, but even if they are distantly related, its still there. I'm glad he was able to relate to him a little bit and I hope he eventually becomes a part of Teddy's life :)

Ahhh, Amelia and Draco finally kissed (on the lips :p)! I wish she didn't have to go though :/ I like her and Draco's relationship and I really hope its Amelia who is shaking Draco awake... They are perfect for each other(:

Keep writing, girl! Can't wait to read more :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad that you liked it when Harry spoke at the funeral. I figured he should play some part in it since Narcissa lied which in turn saved his life too. I didn't make Ron go because well it's Ron. I figured there would still be too many bitter feelings between them still. He's definitely a guy who knows how to hold a grudge.

You hit the nail on the head with Teddy. He was there to represent the new hope that everyone had fought for. I also wanted him to make a small connection with Draco because they are related and right now Draco needs to know he's not alone.

Yep Cliffhanger...I Love them! :) I swoon every time I think of the two of them.

Thanks again!!

-Jenn

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