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Review:daretodream says:
Anya's going to break out of her perfectionism, lose control a little bit?

I loved her reply to the kid who "asked her out" when she was trying to get Alicia to leave. It was quick and witty and harsh, and I absolutely adored it.

She seems to have a lot of ghosts, a lot of fears though, doesn't she? Her relationship with her mother certainly seems strained, though there could be many reasons for that, especially considering the fact that she is in hiding.

Keep up the good work!


Author's Response: hey there again.anya breaking out of her state of mind is one of the main pointsi tried to make.i want to chnge her,i want her to become something different,but first of all,i need to buil her initial character befor i can break her. Yeah she does have alot of ghosts and especially fears,im counting and those to trap her. I really and to use her weaknesses against her,thats why i have tried to make her as flawed as possible. Her relationship with her mother is one major point in this story...and to think i was almos about to cut it out.thank you againfor pointin out that its a plus and not a drawback. Your reviews came at a very bad time in my life,i was unsure even about keeping this story here,i just wanted to delete it.and you couldnt knot it of course,but your reviews,and those of other people who liked this story,kept me afloat.
Ive practically edited and rewritten the whole story,but its still here! :D so thank you for your words.

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