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Review:Hagrid21 says:
Hi, I've been reading your story for a while now and I've just caught up to the current chapter. I really like how your plot sticks to canon and really the pace and excitement of the story. I think you nailed Harry and Ron's relationship perfectly, especially how they act without hermione to help them. It feels like its building for a really big finish and i can't wait.

One thing I noticed though is that the only reason grindelwald is after Harry is because he is the master of the elder wand. Yet every time they have faced one another Harry wasn't using it. Shouldn't Grindelwald be wondering why Harry isn't using it and where it might be if Harry isn't carrying it with him.

Overall, I really think the story is awesome and I can't wait for the big finish.

Author's Response: Harry and Ron's relationship is my favorite part to write, it's great. And without Hermione, we all know they're a bit hopeless at heart.

I did think about that, but I decided it would be a bit pointless to go into great detail, it doesn't really affect the story. Plus, I imagine if you're dueling to the death, the last thing on your mind is probably the other guys wand, even in this situation haha.
Really appreciate the review, glad to hear our thoughts.


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