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Review:daretodream says:
I really really liked that you had some more description of Anya in this chapter, though I must admit you have me intrigued about what she could be hiding from. It's an interesting concept.

Alicia is a character, huh? She certainly is more boisterous and out there than Anya is, I can tell that and it is only the second chapter.

That really wasn't a very good date that Anya had through, was it? I'm glad that she got herself looking nice in order to go break it off with him, it always makes things better, doesn't it?

I'm intrigued by her relationship with her mother, that's for sure!

~Cassie

Author's Response: HI again! Ah, the description, the bane of my life. You hav eno idea how many times i have written and editen and re-written thise first few chapters, until it got to hte point where i wrote the whole story over (partially)
But Im so happy that you like my main character. And her relationship with her mother is such a major point. You reviews were one of the reasons why i kept those parts in the chapters when i was editing, because it got me thiking of how much i wanted that art of Anya to be in this story and how strongly seh was defined by her relationship with her mum. So thank you for saying that - the reason this story still has Katherine so much in it is mostly because of these words you wrote here.
I love writing Alicia too, she is such fun. Where Anya is sober and dark, Alicia is exuberant and completely projected on the outisde. they are so different, but it think they work as freinds... most of the time.


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