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Review:maskedmuggle says:
First off, a big congratulations on the TWO dobby awards that you won! This story is most deserving of it - I'm enthralled chapter after chapter and the action in this was definitely top quality.

YOU ARE SO CREATIVE! I loved the memory, the setting and the rules of this round! I think the thing I actually loved most was all the different individual approaches to winning and all their different motives. I thought Tonks hiding her flag in a tree and Fred transfiguring it to a ring was really clever! I also loved how both the people who were actually eliminated were eliminated kind of accidentally.

Your plot is actually quite complex and it all interweaves so well together! I loved Tonks using her metamorphmagus abilities, how Fred thought it was George… aww. And the James/Severus battle was intense! Poor Vincent disapparating and leaving his hand with James' cloth on it! Hehe. There was only thing I didn't understand - why Peter didn't put up a fight against Tonks? and i'm not quite sure why he was laughing manically at the end as well - is it because he knew Cedric had not eliminated Tonks but himself instead?

Apart from that, everything was completely perfect. ♥

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm still over the moon about the Dobbys. :) :)

My favorite part of writing this chapter was the individual strategies - they were all different types of crafty. I wanted to keep readers guessing about who would win and lose up to the very end.

Good question about Peter! He didn't put up a fight because he secretly wanted to be eliminated. He's a coward at heart, and the only reason why he's in the tournament at all is because he was bullied into it by Remus, Sirius, and James; so he's using this as his ticket out. At the same time, he's all about the self-preservation, so that's why he was sitting there hiding in disguise. So when he found out that Cedric thought he was eliminating Tonks but was actually eliminating Peter, he was nothing short of delighted.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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