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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Okay, so I had no clue there was going to be a second chapter to this until today when I saw it on my "favorite stories list". I was very pleased. :)

I can't believe those girls had the guts to do that to Clara. Clara is so sweet, and she doesn't deserve any of it. And they really are bitches! They remind me of the many cliched snobs at high school who pretend that their shit doesn't stink. (Pardon the unecessary language)

I love how Dom, Freddie, and James are so protective of her. It makes me smile how they're stepping up to make Hogwarts a better place, even for just one person at the moment. It's really a sweet thing to read.

And the small detail about the portraits. I loved it. Of course Albus would be smiling admiringly, and Snape would be scoffing about. And James wanting to know about his grandfather. Very cute indeed!

And I love how Clara stands up for herself towards the end. I fist pumped at that. I have a feeling that the Potter-Weasley clan are going to strengthen Clara as the story progresses, and I can't wait to read more of that.

Love your stuff as always,


Author's Response: Someone else thought it was a one-shot, but it's a short story! There's another two chapters to go! :p

Maybe I should have made it a bit clearer...

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! I think the Weasleys/Potters would have been good people and wouldn't stand for that type of bullying, so I thought I'd put it in there. ;)

The girls, ugh. They're so mean and yuck. But they got what they deserved. Muahahahahaha!

We always see the portraits talking in the actual series, so I think that they would often talk to the students. :p

It is good that Clara stands up for herself, isn't it? It's such a good feeling actually doing it and writing it! :D

Psst... you aren't meant to swear in a review. They're meant to be all 12+, otherwise all my reviews would have bajillions of swear words in them. :p

I'm glad you liked my stuff, the updates on this should be fairly quick because I have it all written out! :D

Thanks for leaving me another lovely review! :D

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