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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Like when I said Katrina may be my favorite vampire, I think Ben may be my favorite human. Despite his hatred for vampires, he still has honor as she's a girl. Which makes him awesome. His honor will lead him to doing what he knows is right, I think. Or I can assume, because I don't know.

I can't believe they'd keep a human in a cell with someone they believe to be a dangerous monster, even if they don't have enough energy to make another energy field. It makes me wonder about Delilah.

I'm glad Katrina is able to resist the urges. Maybe then they'll see not all vampires are monsters...

And the story about Pollock intrigued me. I like the idea that your magic is gone when you're bitten, like it being sucked out, and that was how the vampires took control. Really interesting idea.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Sam.

Author's Response: Hey Sam! :)

Hmm, I wonder if your opinion will change or not as the story progresses! I like them too, but I'm not yet sure which one is my favorite in each category :) I definitely like Ben's back story, since it's soo sad! And I love guys who stand up for a girl, even if she's not technically human :) Haha, this is a quality I will be sure to write more of, because you're spot on, it will be a defining quality for one of our awesome heroes :)

Well, yes, though they would have done a search and deemed Ben to be a little more of a threat since he obviously knows how to hunt (from his bow) and he has a wand which means he's a wizard. Mostly, it's essential for Katrina and Ben to meet.

I had a hard time writing that part. I rewrote that scene again and again. I don't know how much restraint it would take, as I'm obviously not a vampire, but I tried to write it as convincingly as I could ;)

That took a long time to develop as well. In fact, I've got a prequel planned after the completion of this, but definitely not the same length... probably a novella at longest. But it was important to me to be able to explain everything, so I thought long and hard about how the whole thing would need to have worked!

Hope to get in the groove of writing again! I definitely miss it and it was way too long in between updates for this chapter and the last! Hope to see you around again! :)

-Becca

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