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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
I really liked finding out Ben's backstory before we met him in the present; knowing how he lost his father, and then hearing that he'd just lost his mother as well, allowed his feeling of revenge and want to get to the camp to make so much more sense then if we hadn't had the backstory, I think. I look forward to reading Katrina's.

Rosetta is the girl from the beginning, yes? Anyway, I feel so sorry for Carmen; losing her sister, then finding Rosetta, only to potentially lose her, too. I love the loyalty she has for her, and maybe even Beau... Could something go on between those two? I was like 'whoa, really' when he said he couldn't lose her.

Next chapter. :)


Author's Response: Hi again!

I had a lot of people request some of this for each chapter so little by little information about the characters- where they got to where they are when you meet them so it's not little information in a vast universe as it's about 300 years into the present setting of next generation xP

Ben's back story actually made me cry, and I was the one writing it!

Yes, Rosetta is the one from the beginning! And she has quite the story too, so when we get into her point of view again, I'll be telling hers :) I'd like to get into Carmen's family background-- you know, embellishing on the tidbit that she'd lost a sister and how she met the rebels/Beau. Speaking of that... my lips are sealed! They are very close though! :)

Thanks again for stopping by and reviewing! :D


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