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Review:bester_jester says:
Another good chapter. I really like Adelynn. She's smart, professional and likeable. It would be great to get to know Oliver better too.

Just one thing - the flow of the story seemed a little abrupt. The way it went from them just meeting in the previous chapter and then suddenly flirting about showers together was hard to relate to. Dont get me wrong though, I love them both, but it would be great to see their friendship develop before a relatiomship.. I hope that makes sense.

Lovely writing so far! Gwen is a horrible person hehe

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel that way too, but I've always pictured Oliver as being a natural flirt. Sort of like it's his normal behavior, so when I write it in, I'm trying to signal that he's getting back to normal.

I'm very glad that you like the story, and I love the comments you're leaving. I'm definitely going to use some of your pointers in up coming chapters!

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