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Review:Aphoride says:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Ahem, I'm glad you updated :D (As if, you know, that wasn't obvious)

Fleur's met Arthur! Gosh, that was quick! I feel as if were you any other author and this any other story, it would be much, much too fast and far too soon for her to meet his dad, but it's Bill and it's Fleur and it's you and this story and so it's just so wonderfully perfect :)

I love how you mentioned about her returning to France for Christmas and seeing her family again. I felt as though I learned so much about her family in the few sentences you talked about them, and yet we haven't actually seen all that much of them. All of them feel as though you know them so well, even if we don't know them that well yet, but we will by the end of it... I feel like I explained that very badly... O.o

Anyway, I love this story so much and things are developing so neatly, but in ways I never expected. They still haven't worked out what's happening with Mhairi in the bank (or at least, Fleur hasn't, Bill might have already) but they're so far past that that it doesn't seem to matter any more. I love how their relationship has almost literally exploded without Fleur noticing. It's a bit like a snowball, I guess: picking up momentum until it's completely out of control and nothing and no one can stop it, except that big rock which is death, lol.

The only thing I did notice is you said 'inter-country' when talking about the Apparition Bureau. Wouldn't it be International instead? :P It's just a small thing...

Gah, this story is so very, very lovely and I'm glad I helped to encourage you to keep writing - even if just in a small way! :D

Aph xx

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