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Review:kandekisses says:
Hey hun, sorry for the bit of delay here.

But I've got to say I sympathize with you about not writing in so long. My story is still kind of on hiatus. So kudos to you for coming back and writing again.

I can tell you are a very experienced and talented writer though. I loved your descriptions in this chapter. It felt as though you were watching Sirius follow the trail of blood into the forest. Very suspenseful.

I was half expecting something to jump out on him. I do wonder what happened to Annabel and why Sirius was out so late by himself lol.

As far as grammar and things, nothing caught my eye. The only thing that got to me a bit was how demure Sirius was. I would expect him to be more confident in that situation. Other than that this was a great first chapter.

You did a good job. I don't think you have to worry about being out of touch!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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