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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HellO!

Sorry that its been a while, real life came in the form of me getting sick and actually having something to do for my Navy stuff. Anyway, on to this!
I can't imagine how much work you had to do to come up with this story! I was incredibly interested in what you had hinted at in the last chapter with the elemental magic but it was such a great visual in this chapter! The information that the boys got from Slughorn left me wanting to know so much more and I really liked that you put in Harry's experience. It tied in eerily well and I'm surprised that no one else has ever done this before so bravo! :D
Also, I really liked what you did with all the Houses, having them so closely related to one another. Fire, air, water and earth was a really unique way of looking at them all and perhaps is why they're so different. Or why alot of people consider them to be different and I really, really love the history that you've brought into this. I'm far too lazy to do something so ingenious! *Gives fat kitten*
Anyhoo, can I talk about the ending to this? Not only was it shocking and creepy to have the Hunt coming back, but the teachers were unsettled as well! That's never a good sign and Tregeagle! I never thought that he would go to them (Nice use of the Killing Curse in there too. I didn't expect that) and I was really worried when the boys gave their blood. It worked though, which poses millions of other questions! I could go on for hours about how amazing this was! Nothing wrong with your flow, grammar or characters, it was an excellent read as always. :)
I shall be back!
Ah! In case you weren't on the forums, the Misfits are back and I really have to start finishing that story up. Sigh. This story has actually really inspired me! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thank you :^D

I'd forgotten just how much had gone into this one... if I'm honest I can barely remember where and when the ideas for the four elements and the bloodline came together, but it all fits, doesn't it? Makes me proud to re-read it! The next chapter is entitled "Answers" - so hopefully that should wrap things up a little bit!

I am now heading away for a week into North Wales (Glyn's bit of the country). It was probably being here last year that inspired the whole elements thing, actually... incredible place! Will make sure I find the time to track down the Misfits whilst I'm there.

Sheriff


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