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Review:Veritaserum_Girl says:
Hey! Sorry for not reviewing as quickly as I should've; it's been a busy week!

But, this was another good chapter. I think that your interpretation of this incident was spot-on. I'm also glad that Remus gets upset at Sirius for the 'prank' that he attempted to pull. Even though Remus did participate in some of the Marauders' pranks, I'm sure he knew when to draw the line. I'm also glad that you showed what kind of friendship Remus and Lily have. I'm not sure why, but I feel like it's important detail of the Marauders era that I think many should include into their work.

I really like what you've got, so far! c:

Author's Response: Hey no worries! I took my sweet time to come here and respond! XD

The prank was something I wasn't planning on doing. This was only suppose to be a two chapter story where it told his story of the marauders first night out. However...well...it has now become a novel. Hahaha! So the prank needed to be told.

Remus does know where to draw the line however he's not brave enough to tell his friends to stop. He's afraid of losing them and being alone once more.

Lily was a struggle to write but she was fun regardless. I don't know if Lily ever knew about Remus but I think she would've figured it out anyway. She's suppose to be a clever witch.

Anyway! Thank you so much for dropping by!

--Rosie


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