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Review:Jchrissy says:
I saw your post about a crummy day. I'm here to try and make it a bit better! Though this review will probably suck because I'm trying to get an email finished up.

FEELS. Why? What did I ever do to you, that warranted you attacking me with 'i love James and this is the beginning to his end' feels??

You're such an amazing writer. I feel like I've said that so many times that the meaning probably seems diluted, but it's true. I can go weeks without reading part a chapter of this, then with the first line I'm sucked back in to that terrible forbidding feeling. We know what happens. They don't.

I love seeing Minerva a bit softer with James. It was the same woman in the Darkest Grave. You characterize her better than I've ever scene.

James takes a real step into adult hood with this. He commits to something that kills him, but he also is part of the puzzle that ends this war for good. Only he never gets to see that ;(. No one can break my heart like the Marauders, but written in your truly perfect style just adds so much more.



Author's Response: That was so sweet of you, Jami. :)

Haha, I can't say I'm all that sorry about the feels. I loved writing this chapter and I'm glad that sense of "end" came across well.

Aw, thank you so much. I think that's the whole tragedy of this era - knowing what we do and having no power to do anything about it. All the feels!

Ah, thank you. Minerva is a notoriously difficult character to get, so I'm really pleased you enjoy my characterization of her in this story.

James definitely has to grow up quite fast, they all do. But I think that's what makes him who he is. He's such a strong character and he sacrifices so much for those that he loves. Poor James.

Thank you again for your lovely review. It definitely cheered me up when I read it. :)


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