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Review:caoty says:
Hello, it's me again. :P

Anyway - I thought this fic was fantastic. Sirius is perfectly in character here, and his sadness and anger about everything that's been taken away from him is absolutely heartbreaking, especially when you've contrasted Peter getting fat with the situations of the other Marauders. That's pretty intense, and it suits the human emotional rollercoaster that is Sirius Black perfectly.

I also really liked your use of visuals - the settings are wonderfully vivid here, and it's really pretty, while also bringing the reader right into Sirius' situation.

I can't wait to see the edited version even though I'm the one who betaread it... because I'm arrogant. XD

Good luck with your challenge, too! :3

Author's Response: Well, hello again! =)

I'm really glad you liked it. Sirius is quite an interesting character to write, especially after his stint in Azkaban. He's so easy to just write as a regular teenage bad boy, but as an adult he's much more challenging.

Thanks for your help with betareading. It was very nice of you. =)

Thank you for the review!


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