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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I came from the Gryffie Common Room review tag! =)

The first of all, the idea of writing Remus's story from Madam Pomfrey's point of view is a really good idea. It would have been fun to know more about Madam as well, since she gets so little airtime in the books.

I recommend that you proofread this one-shot once more, since there was quite a lot of tiny errors. You can ask someone from the beta thread on the forums to read it for you, if you need some help with it.

Consider if using all the parentheses is necessary in the text. Using them abundantly breaks the flow of the story. Same thing goes with the ellipses.

With some rereading this fic could be really nice one. As it is, it was a fun read. =)

Author's Response: Hi!
First off, thanks so much for the review! I just loved the idea of Madame Promfey, so I wrote it down!

And, I know I need to edit it, I just don't feel like it. :P

Thanks so much for the review!

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