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Review:kandekisses says:
Hey hun, sorry for the little delay there! Got a little caught up with things in RL, but enough about that... on to the review!

Well, what can I say about Edie? Except that I absolutely love your characterization of her so far. I was just about dying throughout this first chapter. Edie, Seamus, and Dean seem like they would be pretty fun to hang out with. It reminds me of when I was a kid I had two best guy friends that I was with all the time &everyone called us the three musketeers. *aww memories* lol. So I'm glad you made a story with this kind of friendship in it.

There's a lot of little details that I like but I think my favorite part was Edie's pick up line. She really is something else. But I love that she is such a stung personality and does whatever she feels like.

I think as an opening chapter you did very good! It's an intriguing start to see where this story is going to go.

Author's Response: No problem! I appreciate any review at all regardless of how long it takes ;)

Aww, the Three Musketeers. I too had two best guy-friends when I was younger, and they're certainly having an affect on how I write Dean and Seamus--unbeknownst to the IRL boys, hehe.


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