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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your requested review.

Okay, so now that I know that this is Hogwarts-era and not post-hogwarts the story is bit easier to follow :P

I found this quite enjoyable. Harry/Ginny is a good pairing if written well and I think that you have written them well together so kudo's to you!

One thing that I did notice was that Mrs. Weasley signed her letter 'love, Molly' but throughout the books Harry never calls her Molly but always Mrs. Weasley, now, you can correct me if I'm wrong but I don't think that Mrs. Weasley signed her notes to students with her first name. Now, I might be completely wrong because I haven't read the books in a while but that's what I remember off the top of my head :P

Apart from that it's really good. The characterisation was quite good and the storyline is really good so far.

I wonder how Harry is going to survive New Years with the Dursley's.

Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Yeah I'm not sure why I decided to go with Molly, but I don't think her signature is ever refered to anywhere in the books (though I admit it's been a long time since I've reread them) so I figured Molly is as good a signature as any ;)
I'm glad you like my Harry/Ginny pairing.. but don't get too used to it. LOL
Anyone who has read my work knows it's not a pairing I particularly like, so it never lasts for long ;)

Thanks for the R&R
~Moon~


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