Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:javct says:
Back again.

I really like where this story is going. I really like her relationship with Albus (even though it wasn't touched on /much/ in this chapter. I still feel as though I'm going to love it).

I still think that Scorpius is the father - is he the father?

Just one grammatical thing that I picked up. When using exposition (?!) there doesn't need to be a capital letter after it. For example, this:

Erm... Ron... can I stay here tonight?' He asked his voice full of pleading.

Would be this:

Erm... Ron... can I stay here tonight?' (he) asked his voice full of pleading.

Apart from that it was really good. I'm really excited to see where this goes!
Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Thank you again for the review.

Her relationship to Albus is going to be a breath of fresh air to set apart all of the angst in this story. You will love it as he is going to be the one teasing her and making her feel more normal once her secret comes out.

Thank you for pointing that out. I'll make sure it gets changed!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 166
Submit Report: