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Review:corbin2013 says:
i came across this story in the 'recently added' section a few days ago looking for a good story to read... i spent at least 6 hours a night for the past three days reading it. it's so amazing, your plot line is stunningly intricate and i can't believe you were able to think of it all on your own. i legitimately started crying when i realized that eli had taken narcissa's place in azkaban. your character development is wonderful. the plot line is wonderful. it's new and fresh from other post hoggy stories i've read and i want to commend you on that.

two improvements i can think of are Natalie's date of birth in some earlier chapter i don't remember. To my calculations, i think she should have been born in 1980, not 82, unless she was 2 years younger than malfoy. i could be incorrect but i just wondered. second, there's a point where draco and hermione are talking and she says, 'happiness can be found in the gloomiest of times,' i really think it would be improved if you quoted dumbledore and said, 'happiness can be found in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.' i think it would add a spin off of dumbledore to maybe talk about draco and dumbledore's relationship, maybe more of that loving side of draco we don't get to see much at the point in the story? what hermione says also seems a little out of place because it is so close to what dumbledore said, but again, just a suggestion(:

i really enjoyed reading this for the past few days and still find your plot unbelievable, you really are a true writer

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